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My Own Photography [deleted] says:

A mothers Love

Pretty Fun!

Happy Baby!

And the Baby's face is naturally red like that
Posted at 3:10PM, 5 July 2008 PST ( permalink )

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Charitie says:

I love the expression on the babies face.
Posted 5 months ago. ( permalink )

My Own Photography [deleted] says:

is this all?
Posted 5 months ago. ( permalink )

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tom.hoops  Pro User  says:

OK.

Picture 1.
The crop is too tight, You have cut off the childs ear and it looks unbalanced. The light is nice and friendly
This one would probably benefit from a square crop to concentrate on just the mum and baby. Neither subject is engaging the camera either..

Picture 2.
Nice but nothing more really, again safe colours and a fun crop. Perhaps a different framing again as you have removed some of the blondes hair, this would have been OK if it was intentional. The compositional elements don't work too well.

Picture 3.

the best of the 3. The yes are along the top 3rd line and engage the camera/the viewer. . Over all it's fine and a nice photo.
Originally posted 5 months ago. ( permalink )
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