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Well seen, love the title!
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Nice snapshot but the two vertical lines are killing it. I first thought it was a note!
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Posted 28 months ago.
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Yeah, whatever they are, they're really noticable
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Posted 28 months ago.
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Ok thanks, I want to improve... It's glass doors.
Posted 28 months ago.
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I cant't see much there... even the lighting is so bad...
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Posted 28 months ago.
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The wheelchairs have character, and the lighting, why is it bad?
Posted 28 months ago.
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that's just a bunch of wheelchairs waiting for passengers - don't see any story related to that...
And it's all too dark: no light, no color...
And the background is just pointless, really nothing to see.
No, sorry, even with the title I don't buy.
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ok with elements missing in bg, don't agree the foreground is too dark, the silhuetes is enough. The background is not dark.
Posted 28 months ago.
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one of two things:
- either you shoot for the wheelchairs shapes, and you need some clear background;
- or you don't care about bg, so we want to see the wheelchairs, not theire shape
But the chaires are plain black, and the ground is DARK... I mean, it's not silhouette, it's a bunch of dark things (chairs, ground, lines, dots...)
To conclude (for me): your subject is weak, and your making weaker. You do have many more better shots in your stream!!!
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there's something almost eerie about this. Like there were people in those wheelchairs but now they're not.
I kinda like what this could be, and would probably try this too, but I have to agree with at least some of what kmsf said. Reading his other comments too, I think he's a good critic. The lines in the foreground (from the glass) just hurt this too much.
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Posted 28 months ago.
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I have to agree with the previous critics.. The chairs are not revealing themselves against the background. The message is great but it's not as interesting as it promised.
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Posted 28 months ago.
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They won't get far on foot.
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Posted 28 months ago.
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lol
Posted 28 months ago.
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Isolate on the wheelchair, and show some acual airplanes so we don't have to rely onyour title to imagine what a great photo this should have been.
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Posted 28 months ago.
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Could have been really good...but I have to agree witht he above critics....work with it more.
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Posted 28 months ago.
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aphantos [deleted] says:
sorry, but it just looks ugly to me
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Posted 28 months ago.
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Sorry- this does nothing at all for me. Next time wait for some people.
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